Project 2 peer review
Paper 3, Draft 1
Tanner McDougal
After reading over the essays of my peers, I believe that both of them are on the right track for their essays. In John’s essay, the thesis is “Far too often people attempt to improve their moral behavior by merely defining moral values, writing out a code of conduct.” In Brooke’s essay, the thesis is “Humans are able to justify how they act due to their beliefs, and when logic interferes with a common belief, people will either ignore the logic or respect the belief.” Also, both John and Brooke have both integrated and cited sources.
